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Miss

Heather Lydia Thornhill 1981 (Manchester)

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I miss you like tasting the rain for the first time.
I miss thinking about your eyes lightening in the sun.
I miss the warm colours on your skin.
I miss feeling special from within.
I miss talking as if I didn't know what it meant.
I miss the honesty in your compliments.
I miss the way you dressed
I miss the intensity of trying to impress.
I miss the emptiness I allowed in myself.
I miss the perfection in every movement.
I miss how you motivated me like the world was going to end.
I miss the mistakes you tried to bend
back into place.
I miss your face.
I miss the disgrace of youth.
I miss you.
Do you miss me yet?
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Written on March 22, 2023

Submitted by heathert.34240 on March 22, 2023

Modified on April 28, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme ABCCDEFGHIJJKKLMN
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 621
Words 139
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 17
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Heather Lydia Thornhill

Moods and mindsets poetry. Published. Book in progress: Don't talk rot. more…

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  • dougb.19255
    dougb.19255
    As if the world were going to end? This speaks to the intensity of the emotion, as if there was not enough time. Dangerous to let anyone have such an unstoppable grip on your Heart. Anyone except Jesus. The songs that sound, You Are My Everything. Balderdash. One will be disappointed if unrealistic. I saw this in lawyer work with divorces. Would you cut her some slack, you Jerk?
    Maybe there might be a turnaround. And sometimes it did happen. A four pointer…Wayne Blair. 
    LikeReply 11 year ago

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