My Pain



Can you look into my eyes and see my pain.
I've been through so many ups and downs that's I'm going insane.

My social circle has turned into a square.
Due to the some many dishonest people who truly doesn't care.

I've always been taught to treat others like I would want to be treated right.
But sometimes others don't want love they rather fight.

My doors are shutting my heart has turned cold.
My sunny days is now dark and now I live with stories untold.

How much more pain can I encounter I may never know.
But I will try to be focus on life so I know which direction to go.

As I go through life I've learned that life may not always be fair.
But sometimes I just wish the some people would really cared.

As life goes on I know things will get better.
I'm looking forward to this day so I can get myself together....
 
Lynn Hale

About this poem

Things that I've experienced in life but has gotten better

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Written on July 01, 2018

Submitted by lynnhale2010 on March 20, 2023

Modified on April 03, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AA BB CC DD EE BX FF
Closest metre Iambic heptameter
Characters 839
Words 184
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2

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