My Rival

Chris Wainwirght 1970 (Liverpool)



So, what defines a rival?
What makes a great adversary?
Do they have to be male or female?
Or maybe it’s something I cannot yet see?

Isn’t a rival someone who strives to beat another?
In my case, whoever aims for the same life goals as me?
Someone who frustrates, hinders or even harms in some way
The one who forbids me, to be.

What do I perceive to be my biggest threat right now?
Is it the hassles of daily life?
Is it something that really doesn’t need to be worried about?
Or is there something that really does cause me much strife?

So which one is my arch-nemesis?
A true foe, the sworn enemy?
Who is the one that stands before all others?
It’s simple, that one....        ...is me!

About this poem

A look at ones self

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Written on March 21, 2012

Submitted by chrisw.65202 on March 16, 2023

Modified on March 16, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme XAXA XAXA XBXB XAXA
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 700
Words 148
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4

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  • dougb.19255
    Self absorption, self confidence, self centred. All prove very perilous pre-occupations. You hit the nail right on…Wayne Blair
    LikeReply1 year ago

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