at the gates
at dawn,
I settle down at the front gate
at the temple's door
sip rose water from Stoney springs
to heal the panic
let me witness the wonder
of you uncoiling your fingers
healing a beheaded flower stem
breathe into it before the sun rises
brush the floors of the tender shelter.
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gather in a basin
dried crystal tears of broken stars
the missing part of a starving moon
that can't defect its orbit
to witness you purify water into a holy body
dipping your feet into it
from the front gates
show me what I'm missing
to praise you
when everyone is gone
so the mourning could find me content
or will I wither here
before I'm let in?
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About this poem
waiting to go in
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Written on March 13, 2023
Submitted by azdi404 on March 13, 2023
Modified on March 20, 2023
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Closest metre | Iambic trimeter |
Characters | 716 |
Words | 125 |
Stanzas | 1 |
Stanza Lengths | 25 |
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