Ode to the sun



Ode sun
Oh sunset
Your dying golden light
Turning those brown eyes to honey
Turning the sky to shades of gold, violet, blush, rose, and  indigo
Sitting on a hill
Grass as soft as silk
The giant mahogany tree casts its majestic shadow on the ground
As I rest against  Its rough bark
Oh sunset
Your dying light cast a gray tint on our earth
Your warmth leaving my bones
The flowers sweet scent leaves my nose as they say goodbye to you sun
As you rest your great head on your pillows of clouds and blanket of blue sky
Oh sunset
You turn the boring creek to jewels
Goodnight sun
I await for you to wake me
With your comforting golden beams
Gently brushing the sleep away
Chasing the dark
Oh sun
How i've missed you

About this poem

I didn’t know I liked poetry- I had tried it but teachers forced topics and templates into my face and I felt trapped- so one day Mrs Lewis was the teacher who changed my life and opened my eyes she let us read poems from other great authors and picked apart the different types of poetry, and it was all beautiful, then one day she gave us the freest topic I've heard from a teacher of creativity, an Ode and it was amazing. So I thought and everyone did odes to the moon or items they loved or hobbies but me I wanted to paint the picture of what comforted me even through my darkest trauma, the light, the sun how it always shone again no matter the clouds that covered it so here was born the first serious poem I wrote and it led me to a path of art that you don’t see with your eyes necessarily but your mind. Thank you mrs Lewis 

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Written on March 08, 2021

Submitted by Ilovetoothless06 on February 27, 2023

Modified on March 14, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme aBcdefghiBjkalBmadnoiap
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 716
Words 142
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 23

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