Its me, the voice in your head

A. Herrera 2008 (California)



Hey there, how’s it going?
It’s me, the voice in your head
I’m always sneering and laughing
Poisoning your mind like lead

I know sometimes you hate me
Or I make you feel unsure
But you also really need me
Or you’ll get all lonely in there

I’m probably your best friend
The only one who understands
I’m always there listening
The only true friend you ever had

Sure, I guess I’m a little toxic
I leave your self-confidence in shreds
Yet you always let me inside
I’m probably the reason you think you need meds

About this poem

One’s inner voice is always there, whether we like it or not. It can cripple us with self doubt or entertain us in moments of intense boredom. This was my attempt of putting it into words.

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Written on June 16, 2022

Submitted by icefoxh on February 02, 2023

Modified on March 14, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme ABAB CXCX XDAX XXXD
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 526
Words 100
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4

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