3 Blessed Saints



My eyes open wide and now I can see,
How cruel this world can sometimes seem to be,
The pain it has caused to my soal and life
To try to wipe away the pain and strife,

I scream out loud and drop to my knees,
I plead out .."I want to be free!" ,
I cover my face with my hands and hide,
I yell to the heavens , Lord you know I've tried,

A warmth comes over me saying, "You are strong."
A flutter of hope tell me that Yes I do belong.
A smile shows right in front of my face.
A couple more bright eyes and lips tell me ,Mom, you are in the right place.
 
The three true blessing that God gave to me.
The butterflies that saved me from from grief.
The total peace every time  breathe,
The special trust and faith they gave me glee.

My children are my rock my soal and my light.
My blessed future, my push, and my fight.
My blood of my heart and all of my spark.
My robins who lead me out of the dark.

So now I say to the heavens above.
Surely I thank you for the ones who deelpy love,
Me as i am and how i am growing to be,
The best person, the famous glow , and the Mom they made me.

About this poem

This poem is about how my children saving me from the path that I was going down. They are more powerful than some people believe. I hope this can bring more individuals faith hope and mostly warmth to all who are going through a tough time. We can change our stars with a little bit of Faith! :}

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Written on February 02, 2023

Submitted by raybay696869 on February 02, 2023

Modified on March 14, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AABB XACC DDEE AXXA FFGG HHAA
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 1,088
Words 257
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4

Rachel Rivers

Just a small town girl that has always loved poetry. I have been writing it since i was a very young age . I still do and i use it to write music now and my daughter loves it. I did enter here actually when i was about 11 and made the finals but i had to move and had no internet for a while. lol. So here i am again and just giving back what i have much passion and love for. more…

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