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2:31 - 05/01/2023

Riley Abrahams 2005 (Western Cape)

Suffocated with a sugar-coated taste
I take a bite of your cruel sweetness
Ignorant to the effect you hold
My mind slowly deteriorates
While my heart lives on in bliss
Please no one awake me from this
For I still await your colourful death kiss
Hard against my blue lips
You fill up my senses with joy
As if you were not the one at fault
As if you were not that harmful
I conceal your wrongdoings
And I say that I will stop
But we both know I will never give you up
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Written on January 05, 2023

Submitted by rileyiscrazy13 on February 02, 2023

Modified on March 14, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme ABCDEEEFGHIJKL
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 466
Words 95
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 14
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Riley Abrahams

17 years old I occasionally write poetry when going through intense emotions. I enjoy reading mangas and listening to music more…

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