This Jesus You Mentioned.



This Jesus You  Mentioned


oh I gave the Book a whirl
night-times read it to my girl
stories telling how that rabbi
taught so well and healed.
quite a chap, no doubt of that.
his example got down pat
but his Lordship?
that's the part that
I can't feel.
born again, friends use that term.
but it usually makes me squirm
change the topic, do a chore
or cut things short.
a big leap, fanatic-like
maybe later Bud, all right?
nothing here of the religious sort.
I have time left, I’m sure
to connect to Gospel cure
not intending to cut
my party short.

About this poem

The thought of many a candidate for salvation who dreads the social cost and loss of fun, bad habits and proclivities. Or so he expects.

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Written on March 02, 2023

Submitted by dougb.21370 on March 02, 2023

Modified by dougb.21370 on March 02, 2023

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Doug Blair

Doug was once a lawyer. Frustrated. Went broke 1987. Turned to manufacturing. People talked straight. Worked hard. Listened when appropriate. Lead Hand Shipper and Workplace Safety. Married to Hilary 1974. Two kids Lauren and Jordan. Poet. Photographer. Hiker-photographer. Harmonica busker. http://puffnchord7.blogspot.com/ more…

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