Song of the Wire



An overcast dayIn the summer.A pleasant reliefFrom the heat.
And rising quite Early this morning,I’ve taken a
Cool backyard seat.
The birds are
Surprisingly quiet.
Are they as slow-
Moving as I?
The leaves on the
Maple turn over,
Requesting a drink
From the sky.
And upwards behind
Me, I hear him,
In notes softly
Soothing and sad.
His double-tone tune
Of lamenting,
Today makes me
Mellow, but glad.
I wonder what hurt
He is hiding?
What loneliness
Looms in his soul?
What sickness at home
He is bearing?
What trial he finds
Hard to control?
His heart is the
Heart of a mourner.
And pain is a
Constant we share.
He asks, “May I
Help you by singing?
I know, and God knows,
And we care.”
 
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Written on May 24, 2009

Submitted by dougb.21370 on February 24, 2023

Modified by dougb.21370 on February 24, 2023

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Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 693
Words 148
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 35

Doug Blair

Doug was once a lawyer. Frustrated. Went broke 1987. Turned to manufacturing. People talked straight. Worked hard. Listened when appropriate. Lead Hand Shipper and Workplace Safety. Married to Hilary 1974. Two kids Lauren and Jordan. Poet. Photographer. Hiker-photographer. Harmonica busker. http://puffnchord7.blogspot.com/ more…

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  • aireneguha
    Hey Doug, I came here from your comment on my poem. Absolutely loved reading this, could totally visualize this since I relate to it. Can't wait to read more of your poems.

    Also, I lost Love, The Dove for some reason and had to re-publish it 
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