The Paradox of Life's Journey : The Tug of War Between Destiny and Free Will
In the abyss of time's dark, brooding sea,
I drift aimlessly, a mere mote of dust,
Tossed and turned by cosmic destiny,
And crushed by fate's unyielding, iron thrust.
No guiding hand directs my every move,
No deity's watchful eye my life controls,
No grand design my fate and fortune prove,
No shepherd leads me to celestial goals.
But still, the weight of predestination,
Like chains of steel, binds fast my soul's ascent,
And whispers of the futility of action
Mock every effort, every step, every intent.
The poets of old, with their rhymes and verse,
Sang of free will, of choice and agency,
But what choice is left when the universe
Is but a clockwork of inevitability?
The Greek fates, with their spinning thread,
The Norse Norns, with their weaving loom,
All tell the same tale, of a life ahead,
Scripted, plotted, predetermined doom.
And yet, some say, the future's not set,
That chaos and chance can break the mold,
That randomness can make us masters yet,
And free us from the grip of fate's cold hold.
But I, a creature of this mortal coil,
With eyes that see but shadows of the real,
Am bound by doubt and skepticism's toil,
And trapped within a maze of thought surreal.
For every argument, there's a counterpoint,
For every theory, there's a contradiction,
And reason, like a bird with broken joint,
Can only limp, and flutter, and then, extinction.
The Eastern sages, with their timeless lore,
Speak of illusion, Maya's veil of lies,
Of karma's wheel, that grinds forevermore,
And souls that soar or plummet, as fate implies.
But what solace lies in this endless cycle,
This ceaseless round of birth and death and pain,
This mockery of hope, this farce of survival,
This dance of shadows in a cosmic rain?
No, I refuse to bow to destiny's call,
To bend my knee to fate's relentless march,
To be a puppet in some cosmic brawl,
To be a slave to some impersonal arch.
I'll take the reins of life, and steer my fate,
With courage, will, and reason as my guide,
And though I may not cheat the hands of fate,
I'll live and die as one who's truly tried.
So let the poets sing of fate and free will,
Let the philosophers ponder life's great scheme,
Let the mystics pray for divine skill,
Let the theologians argue God's supreme.
I'll be content to walk this mortal path,
With eyes wide open, heart and mind alert,
And face the future, free of fear or wrath,
And know that in my life, I've been my own expert.
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About this poem
The poem explores the age-old philosophical debate of fate versus free will. The speaker reflects on their experiences as a mere "mote of dust" in the "abyss of time's dark, brooding sea" and feels helplessly controlled by fate's "unyielding, iron thrust". Despite the influence of fate, the speaker refuses to be a "puppet in some cosmic brawl" and instead chooses to take control of their life with courage, will, and reason as their guide. The speaker acknowledges the opinions of poets, philosophers, mystics, and theologians, but ultimately decides to be their own expert in life and face the future with open eyes and a clear mind. The poem presents the idea that while fate may exist, it is still possible for individuals to have agency in their own lives. more »
Written on July 03, 2018
Submitted by Mawphniang.Napoleon on February 19, 2023
Modified on March 05, 2023
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Scheme | ABAB CDCD EFEF GAGA HIHI JKJK LMLM NENE OPOP QRQR STST UVUV WXWX YZYZ XX |
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Closest metre | Iambic hexameter |
Characters | 2,895 |
Words | 598 |
Stanzas | 15 |
Stanza Lengths | 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 2 |
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