Where I Lay



Lay me in a meadow,
That my lungs may fill up with rainwater
And that flowers may sprout from my skin.

Lay me in the forest,
That the trees may grow from my remains
And that mushrooms may thrive from my decay.

Lay me in the desert,
That the sun may boil away my blood
And that the sands will strip away my flesh.

Lay me by the sea,
That the surf may grind my bones to dust
And that my soul may enjoy the crashing of the waves.

Or simply lay me by her side,
That she may lay her head on my chest
And then see how once more I yearn to live.
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Written on January 21, 2023

Submitted by DrJekyll on January 21, 2023

Modified on March 26, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme XXX AXX XXX XAX XXX
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 542
Words 128
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 3, 3, 3, 3, 3

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2 Comments
  • Simeon5
    It has depth as well as whimsy. The poet is one with nature giving totally of self in death and then recalling the right to life so s/he may love again.
    LikeReply1 year ago
  • Shannoncullen2
    Simplicity and purity of language.
    LikeReply1 year ago

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