Redemption



Oh! My heart burns with despair,
As a taunting voice approaches my doorway,
Yearning for peace my soul burns and greys,
As I shatter into pieces, beyond repair.

That face I see; then examine,
A smirk on those lips,
Those malicious eyes,
A devil in disguise; after my own lies.

And so it begins!
The guilt intensifies,
Overwhelming me with its burden; taking away every ounce
of my sanity,
And unfurling the storm of my remorse and sin.

I wear my façade with fear,
Trying to run away from it all,
From the shadows of lies, revenge, secrets and deception,
Towards the glowing light of Redemption.

From Redemption I beg;
I beg for Mercy,
I beg for Peace,
I beg for my Soul,
Which the devil took away from me.

Finally it comes!
The moment of truth,
And Redemption replies,
“ If it is Redemption you wish for, atone first,
First right all the wrong,
First reconcile with your better part,
Do not inflict pain upon yourself or others,
But spread around happiness to everyone. “

About this poem

Redemption is a poem that conveys the emotional distress of a person who has committed a crime, and, the person's journey in search of Redemption.

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Written on January 14, 2023

Submitted by swaranyagupta.2007 on January 14, 2023

Modified on March 14, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AXBA CBBB BBBDC XXEE XBBXD BXBXXXBE
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 982
Words 210
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 5, 4, 5, 8

Swaranya Gupta

I am Swaranya Gupta, a 15-year-old school student from Delhi Public School Ruby Park, Kolkata, India. My hobbies and interests mainly include writing poetry and stories, quizzing, drawing and singing. I am also an avid reader. My interest in reading has helped me hone my creative writing and communication skills. When I am not studying, I also like to listen to songs from Taylor Swift and old english classical music. For the future, I have big dreams and goals, and, I aspire to reach to the finish line with good intentions in my mind and love for family and friends in my heart. more…

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