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I wonder...

Deepa Prabha P 2001 (Bangaluru)

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I wonder what would I feel and how would I feel when I'm just around you...
How would I feel when I just happen to catch your glance at me..
How would I feel when I just look at your smile..
How would it be to be wrapped in your arms feeling your warmth...
It's not just what I feel but also what you feel that matters the most..
How would it feel to be frightened or taunted by the feeling of loosing you each time I look at you...
How would it feel to be me with you .
Just looking into your eyes which makes me forget about the world, instead admire the one that's within you... within me...that is our's ..
How would it feel just to be yours...
May I be strong enough to embrace what I wish for...

About this poem

I think every person in their early twenties might feel a void in life...A space left for a person they love to fill.. or is waiting for such a person, who could just hold their hand and be like just motivate you. So when I felt the void, i wrote this down.

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Written on April 07, 2022

Submitted by deepaprabhap26 on January 19, 2023

Modified on March 14, 2023

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Scheme ABCDEAAFFG
Closest metre Iambic octameter
Characters 702
Words 151
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 10
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