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Frozen Ice

Kumar Shubham 2004 (Patna)

Free verse
In the school of lonely thoughts,
The sunrays also felt like a derailed train.
Still on that wired bench
Which now tastes like salt on cheeks.
Burnt toast and the aftertaste.
Salt so much, no sweetness can adhere.
Coarseness on cheeks,
And the voice that will end me
Someday or another.

About this poem

'Ice and salt keeps the freshness ', the poem is a homage to Melancholia. It is about a lost generation, so lost no bait can help. The lost generation is ours, mine , the young ones inheriting generation of trauma and divisiveness. It's speaks to the young sapling. The ones who feel like they are on the border in between two armies going into a War, the generational and ideological war. Speaks for itself.

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Written on December 28, 2022

Submitted by 17shubhu.2004 on January 16, 2023

Modified on March 14, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme ABCDEFDGH
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 287
Words 58
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 9
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Kumar Shubham

Kumar Shubham, a boy from the Indian City of Patna (Capital of state Bihar). Pursuing the entrance examination for Medical school for a conventional career by ambition but the heart lies in Poetry, Anthology, and writing. Favorite Poet is Sylvia Plath , Maya Angelou and Amanda Gorman. Living a life of feminist in a patriarchal society. Favorite writer is Elif Shafak. A Maverick . more…

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