A thought of lone



It sweeps in like a blind wind.
    You won't feel it first,
But when it anchors and settles,
Then the clicking starts.

You lose your self to an unknown.

Am in a land of no man.
One that only beckons me as man,
It won't stop me but it will cave me in
With all my troubles, it still calls me on
This land is of free space no feelings.
No pain, fear, and the beat of all
         it's quiet, only me.

She said it would be a free fall.
Leaving those pains, nightmares and cries.
How lovely it sounds. You know when you lose your self to an unknown ,
And get what you want.

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Emptiness

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Written on January 14, 2023

Submitted by astine_b on January 14, 2023

Modified on March 14, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme XXXX A BBXXXCX CXAX
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 574
Words 131
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 1, 7, 4

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