a broken vessel bears us well.

Doug Blair 1951 (London)



The broken vesselStrewn across the floor.Fragments scattered far.The pattern of originalGone forever.

The shape, the symmetryThings of the past.One asks:"What the mishap?What the sudden,Shocking drop?"As if somehow
Reversing the loss
Of earlier glory.

And what of that glory?
Thing of men's fashion.
Mis-spent resources.
Calling for kisses
Of praise.
Pride of a pot.
Others have not.
So let it shatter.
Life of convention.
Painful pretention.
Now search for beauty,
Most worthy duty,
Living like Christ
Pearl of great price.
 

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Read psalm 34. And psalm 51.

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Doug Blair

Doug was once a lawyer. Frustrated. Went broke 1987. Turned to manufacturing. People talked straight. Worked hard. Listened when appropriate. Lead Hand Shipper and Workplace Safety. Married to Hilary 1974. Two kids Lauren and Jordan. Poet. Photographer. Hiker-photographer. Harmonica busker. http://puffnchord7.blogspot.com/ more…

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