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BREAKPOINT

Kaci Tami 1960 (Vatukoula)

Free verse
Sometimes
when you least expect
Your life takes a tuen
for the better
or the worst
You are filled with questions
Open ended
Seemingly impossible to answer
Someone once said
the best you can do
is to have faith
and to trust in the goodness of Man
Sometimes though it is hard
when filled iwth self -doubt and recriminations
and depression
Everything seeems skewed
from a different direction
But one thing I am certain
My life has to change
Since I am reaching
the end of my tether

About this poem

This is another of the poems I wrote whilst facing the truth about the life that was my life, keeping up appearances for the sake of image and family and the children while all the while the truth is tearing you apart.

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Written on August 15, 1999

Submitted by taminator2016 on January 16, 2023

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme ABCDEFGDHIJCKFCLCCMND
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 479
Words 89
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 21
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Kaci Tami

I am an aspiring writer, poet, teller of tales that is me. I have always seen things in a different light and from my perspective, it gives you an insight into what makes me tick as a human being. My life is always hectic and the most important thing I have learnt is that there are three things that one should value in life (a) Your loved ones (b)Your health (c) The memories you create with people. In the end, we all leave this world alone, so spend time creating memories and meaningful relationships with individuals and society at large. My poems reflect my perspective on the world at large both real and imagined. I am in the process of collating an anthology of poems so I can share my likes, dislikes and life with others. Thank you for reading my poems more…

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