Broken

Viscountess 1997 (Zambales)



My heart felt your love,
Though I got swayed,
Left you with vague explanations,
Mistakes had its consequences.

Time passed by
Heartaches and sadness
Begun surrounding me
So wrong and it weakened me

How can emptiness be so lonely?
I missed your presence around me.
I wanted to be brave for one time
However, I'm the problem.

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People who were not ready for a commitment and was able to hurt someone because they were not sure with their own feelings.

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Written on January 17, 2023

Submitted by jessaestella01 on January 16, 2023

Modified by jessaestella01 on January 17, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme XXXX XXAA AAXX
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 326
Words 66
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4

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  • Kaytee
    Beautiful poem
    LikeReply 11 year ago

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