The Loch Narse Monster

Ed Riederich 1974 (United States)



Loch Narse Monster

There once was a sea creature
His name was Narse
They called him a narcissist
But it was all a farce

He swam in his deep lake
Forced to live alone
The accusations of Narsey
They were all overblown

The narcissist monster
Was only folklore
But people would imagine
That it was so much more

Tourists would travel there
In their thoughts they would wander
Deciding in their minds
That Narsey was a monster

Accusations of Narsey
They would only increase
But in his heart of hearts
He only wanted peace

Captured photos of Narse
That is where they start
But they only see his head
They do not see his heart
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Written on September 13, 2023

Submitted by What_Ed_Said on December 01, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme A ABXB XCBC ADXD XABA BBBB BEXE
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 632
Words 128
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 1, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4

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