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Promises

S. HARIN SIDDHANTHA 2003 (Chandigarh)

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I want to hold your hands on your way
I wish I could just delay
The pain as I walkaway
I just want to say
I need you to stay
I remember how we used to play
How you held me when I went astray
I have a debt I can never repay
I wish our time together could replay
I know you have to leave anyway
As I can do nothing but pray
No matter what lies in your pathway
I promise you this today
That I will never leave you midway
I will hold your hands all the way
And even when you're faraway
I'll be waiting for you every day

About this poem

This poem I about the promises you make to your loved ones and how even if sometimes they tend to forget it you never do and you will always continue to hold onto them because for you everything was real .

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Submitted by harinsiddhantha on December 20, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 526
Words 123
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 17
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S. HARIN SIDDHANTHA

Hello everyone , my name is harin I am a medical student with a passion for poetry. I am a budding poet and author. I believe poems are not just words on a paper, each word is an ocean of emotions waiting to captivate the readers attention and make him/ her feel that emotions personally. more…

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