Excused?



The breeze through the woods..
The howl at the moon..
The flock of feathers..
The cherries maroon..

They say he speaks to you..
Through all his conceptions..
Says he loves and cares..
Despite lack of devotion..

But the crying cradles..
The screaming doors..
The raging streets..
Where hatred pours..

All hassles get you thinkng..
Are we really excused?
For wrecking all he creates..
For not healing that is bruised?

The quaking mother earth..
The intruding oceans..
Are his ruinous ways..
Of judging our notions..

Taken, that wasnt cared for..
Erased, that had no respect..
We shall be left alone, empty..
With no chance to regret!

About this poem

The Poem emphasis on the fact that if mother nature is taken for granted, we humans wont be excused by the almighty! We will pay the price!

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Written on December 24, 2022

Submitted by mithila.bhide on December 24, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Scheme XAXA XBXX XCXC XDXD XBXB XXXX
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 636
Words 133
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4

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