In passing
I think I saw you today miss lady
I think you saw me too
Because I felt eyes across my face
an attraction unseen yet undeniable
my heart, like the deepest of seas where I keep my feelings hidden
But the memory of our last encounter is like a buoyant force rushing them to the surface
never have I been able to swim yet the hope of you keeps my breast stroke strong until you drift away in the horizon
holding my breath hoping the lighthouse I see is your house as the current pulls me adrift.
About this poem
That moment when you notice someone noticing you with mutual interest.
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Written on November 02, 2011
Submitted by IntoxicatedThoughts on January 07, 2023
Modified on March 05, 2023
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Closest metre | Iambic octameter |
Characters | 493 |
Words | 97 |
Stanzas | 1 |
Stanza Lengths | 8 |
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