Obescience to Eve

You are just rising with the dawn woken up
By the drowsy moon who is the sister to
The just concluded celebration of the celestial
Bodies who had danced on the arms of the
Well known stars....you are  a rare gem but
Unfortunately you don't know yourself but you
Had a foretaste of the apple from the garden of
Eden where Eve has been deceived by king crawler......the Serpent!Even the blind could feel
The deceptive wink of the Liar who cherished
The act of flippant mischief.....at the beckon of the
Dust to dust,I picked the broken China of the sun.

About this poem

This poem talks about the celestial bodies in relation to the feminine role in the affairs of life

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Written on December 27, 2022

Submitted by kemiogunniyi on December 27, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 553
Words 107
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 11

Akinmosin Kemi

Kemi is a Lecturer in the Federal College of Education (special)Oyo,Oyo state, Nigeria. more…

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