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10 COMMANDMENTS

Natalia Carmona

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Take a break ...
Give yourself and Earth the rest
Learn to Be, not just to act
Look more inside than outside
Turn up your sight
Uplift yourself
And learn to fly
Unfold your soul
Embrace the Earth
Shake off the old self
And give yourself new Birth

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It's about becoming Homo Universalis and Homo Luminous

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Submitted by Natdolkar on November 10, 2022

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Characters 246
Words 48
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 11
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