NO my Love, life is unbearable



Stop for a while , let me take a breath
My heart is pounding, ready for its death

Nights are my type and I belong to darkness
Little bit of virtue and more of a wickedness

Doubts charm me and strip my hopes
There's so much pressure that I couldn't cope

I am unable to hold my burden
I want me to go but I am not so certain

Sometimes I wish to live a life
But it takes more than walking over a knife

I am weak and I have no shame to confess
I am rotten and I am a mess

I want you to love me like there is no tomorrow
Leaving behind all, even these pity sorrows.

You think,  I like to be miserable
No my love, its the life that is so unbearable

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Ups and downs of Life

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Submitted by bushramumtazz on November 19, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AA BB XX CC DD EE XX FF
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 653
Words 148
Stanzas 8
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2

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