Analysis of NO my Love, life is unbearable



Stop for a while , let me take a breath
My heart is pounding, ready for its death

Nights are my type and I belong to darkness
Little bit of virtue and more of a wickedness

Doubts charm me and strip my hopes
There's so much pressure that I couldn't cope

I am unable to hold my burden
I want me to go but I am not so certain

Sometimes I wish to live a life
But it takes more than walking over a knife

I am weak and I have no shame to confess
I am rotten and I am a mess

I want you to love me like there is no tomorrow
Leaving behind all, even these pity sorrows.

You think,  I like to be miserable
No my love, its the life that is so unbearable


Scheme AA BB XX CC DD EE XX FF
Poetic Form Couplet 
Metre 110111101 1111010111 11110101110 1011100110100 1110111 1111011101 1101011110 111111111110 01111101 11111101001 11101111101 111001101 111111111101 100111011010 1111111000 1111011110100
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 653
Words 148
Sentences 2
Stanzas 8
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 31
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 62
Words per stanza (avg) 17

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Ups and downs of Life

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Submitted by bushramumtazz on November 19, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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