Goodbye Old Friend



Head full of dreams, not a single one shattered.
She had me, and that’s all that mattered.
Sure the hardships came and passed.
Just little things, they never amassed.

Slowly the hardships got harder and harder.
Soon, I had to think smarter and smarter.
Suddenly there was nothing I could do.
I couldn’t help, she needed someone new.

Perhaps someone more like her.
I began to wonder if there were.
She grew farther and farther away.
There is barely anything left of her here today.

Don’t go old friend, don’t leave me behind.
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Written on November 18, 2022

Submitted by on November 18, 2022

Modified on April 13, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AABB CCDD CCEE X
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 539
Words 108
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 9, 4, 1

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