THE CREATOR

Rebecca Nabuse 1994 (Kamuli)



Come, let's reason together-
Tell me a tale, and a tale tell you I'll
Of a bloke who helped to gather-
And that he created, he helped to kill.
On the river bank they met-
afraid of her parent's wrath and the society's piercing eye,
to him she heed for a heal.
He, the last dough for the village meal-
the sole piece of his mother's wrap;
the last skin on the drum
at his academic climax, such news struck him damn
agape.
It was a psaltery ballad
complacent to his success.
And so-to him, such fate was sent!
Onto her neck, he clung bold
while his head was down bent.
with buzzing and dizziness-
cold she was left
with that inner flesh that saw no cloud!

About this poem

This poem has been used to teach learners but never published before for it is an original composition. I wrote it in commemoration of those girls I grew up with in the village for the fate they befell at the hands of the educated lugubrious village boys.

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Written on November 17, 2022

Submitted by Malcom on November 17, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme ABACDEFFGHIJKLMNMOPQ
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 653
Words 135
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 20

Rebecca Nabuse

I am a Ugandan remote writer and feminist, a literature and English language teacher. poetry is my passion and food to my soul. more…

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