The love we shared



It was drizzling at first
But dazzling now
I've been lazy lately
And crazy over us.

I've been called by names
And I faced all brawls
They all led me to crawl
And laid on the cross
As I died for the wrecks
I felt the rage
As my picture cracks
Under the siege of crackers
Made it hard for trackers
To save my breaking feeling.

Your arrival was a blessing
In disguise, it made me surprised
In my eyes, it was bright
In my ears, it sounded right
In my lips, it felt broader
Than the fright I had.

This was unbelievable
But it was defeateable
We were bearable
But we were unreachable
to our desires.

I was left in frustration
Thought I find redemption
Yet I fell into temptations
Of life, life segregation
Love is in deprivation
Whenever it brawls against you.

My love is up in space
Bigger than Jupiter
Wider than the milky way
My first milky way galaxy
Although we're worlds apart
I wish you love
With all my heart, my lady
I loved the love we shared.

About this poem

It was a poem where I was expressing my feelings to the person we used to share love

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Written on October 09, 2022

Submitted by mnisitsakani330 on October 09, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Scheme XXAX XXXXXXXBBC CXDDEX FAFFB GGXGGX XEXAXXAX
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 963
Words 203
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 4, 10, 6, 5, 6, 8

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