On the train



On the train

We've been standing here
ten minutes ago.
Vietato attraversare i binari
Do not cross the railway lines
I read subtitles
back and forth,
while the melodious
background noise in soft music
like a punch
- in front of the Frecciarossa train
at a speed of 300 km/h
breaks out of brooding board reading.

We're finally off again.
They touch the back of my neck
the receding trees and houses.
Birds on the wires of the poles.

We are accelerating like the World
I'm heading south
others in the ravine of the plain
swallows the dust,
sometimes kick up one's heels

An angry hunger awakens,
the companion of wandering.
The sun is kinder there in the south,
- day after day in a frenzy,
I feel at ease among living, speaking people,
who never yawn, only talk
they live, they burn like church candles,
their smoke engulfs the blue sky,
they fade away like reality.

Susanna Peremartoni
Hungary/Budapest

About this poem

My poem is an experience of one of my travels, when I traveled from Vienna to Livorno. From 2009 to 2019, I traveled a lot by train from Austria to Italy, because my fiancé lived there. The mood of such a journey is the poem.

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Written on October 25, 2022

Submitted by pnsusanna on October 25, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme A BXBXCXXXXAXD XXXX XEAXX XDEFXXCXF AX
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 906
Words 181
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 1, 12, 4, 5, 9, 2

Susanna Peremartoni

She currently lives in Budapest. She wrote her first poems at the age of 16. At the age of 23, she lived and worked in Germany as a ceramic assistant. Exhibited in Helsinki, Vienna. Her first volume was published in 2016, followed by four more volumes of poetry. In 2018, she was the producer of a jazz poetry CD release. The English version is also available in Vancouver, Canada and Reykjavik, Iceland. She has been listed in the USA as a next-generation beat poet since September 2020. Her own CD was released in February 2021 in memory of Australian poetess Judith Wright. Poems with a didgeridoo accompaniment. She also had many photo exhibitions in 2020 and 2021 and 2022 in Budapest. more…

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