My star



The sky is filled with many stars
but some stars are called the brightest star
I refer to this star as you
your heart was kind and true
when I need to talk to someone I could count on u
i wish could show my love to my star
can have a long drive in his favorite car
for a short time, we were together
I thought it would be the start forever
I am your sky,
u are my star ,
I know no matter how hard I try
u are still way far
I think of u in my silence,
I often speak your name
All I have are memories
And your picture in a frame
your memory is my keepsake with which we will never part,
God has u in his keepsake
i have u in my heart
everyone says love is what all u need
but for me love is u indeed
I know that time will not come when we were together
but your love and belief in my heart
 it feels like u will walk with me forever

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Written for someone who meant a world to me but have been died in covid ... dedicated to him

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Written on May 29, 2021

Submitted by Bhavyagajja on October 05, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Scheme ABCCCBBDDEBEBFGHGIJIKKDID
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 836
Words 192
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 25

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