i can see

Jhansi durga sree 2001 (ANDHRA PRADESH)



I can see your blissful smiles
Glittering the dreadful pasts
I can see your sorrow tears
Behind those weary eyes

I can see your lonely times
Seeing all around walk past
Facing hurdles under storms
Awoken the lost brave hearts

I Can see those rising lights
Leads you to Dazzling stars
Blows away your darkness
Chisel you into greatness

No one but only you knows
Destiny to where it leads?
Place that no one knows
To All your happy days

About this poem

It raise from the feelings of author, when she thinks of her miserable past that hurts her tiny little heart. In that sadness, her mind won't stays calm and thinks this -why no one can see the sadness on my face but always sees the smiles lits her face like dazzling starry sky. but the feeling of loneliness always accompanied like a friend to let go of those weird thoughts. To avoid those thoughts she comforts herself saying these lines to herself which can brace herself in warmness of self love.  

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Written on September 04, 2022

Submitted by jhansidurgasree2001 on October 07, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme XXXX XXXX XXAA BXBX
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 437
Words 84
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4

Jhansi durga sree

An Indian who aspires to become a writer from the streets of Vizag. Bearing responsibility of a daughter and sister on shoulders. A person who can't express her feelings so got fond of writing from seventh grade learning and improving herself by herself without any support while pursuing her dream of becoming a writer. more…

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