I Sold My Soul

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  AIDA

  Wow, this poem really had me hooked from the first line! Your use of vivid imagery, such as "red knuckled over porcelain skin" and "transparent enough to count each vein," really helps to bring the reader into the moment and feel the intensity of the act of writing.
  
  I also appreciate the underlying message in this poem about the struggles of being an artist and the internal criticism that comes with it. Your words convey a sense of frustration and self-doubt that I think many creators can relate to.
  
  If I had to offer one bit of constructive criticism, it would be to consider adding a bit more structure or form to the poem. While the free-flowing style fits with the theme of artistry, I think incorporating some deliberate structure (such as a specific rhyme scheme or stanza pattern) could further enhance the overall impact of the poem.
  
  Overall, thank you for sharing this powerful piece! It's clear that you have a real talent for capturing emotions through your writing. more »

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