The late night prayer

Ema Sá 2001 (Lisbon)



Perhaps this was
the truest form of freedom.

Accompanied by the loud noise of the train
an old lady sang, making everyone look and wonder.

heavy from her grocery bags
and the years of hard work and sorrow

The train wasn’t loud enough to silence
this woman’s confident melody.

 Not loud enough to prevent her languid voice from reaching the passerby’s ears and souls,
forcing them to turn their haunted heads around,

searching for the source of this decontextualized sound
during their normally silent commute home.

Through her voice, you could almost visualize the vibrations propelling through the air
carrying a strong melancholy, only overcome by a stronger scent of hope.

Hope for the hard day to end,
for the next one to treat her better

hoping that God doesn’t turn His back on her
praying for the continuation of their holy friendship.

Suddenly, my ever dormant spirituality erupts.
and I too start asking for hope… I need it.

Asking that Her bags turn lighter, and for Her back
Never to be left alone.

About this poem

I’m not a religious person, but I find moments of brief spirituality sometimes. This was my attempt on capturing this one through words.

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Submitted by ema.neves.sa on September 28, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme XX XA XX XX XB BX XX XA AX XX XX
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 1,042
Words 204
Stanzas 11
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2

Ema Sá

Born in 2001 in Lisbon, Portugal, where I read my way through life until the age of 19, when I moved to Germany to study. Currently studying Lyrical singing in Berlin but keeping a passion for writing and an open mind for whatever comes. more…

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