If the world was...

Drishti 2009 (India)



If the world was…
Wouldn’t it be so nice if the world was
As simple as living with Doraemon
There wasn’t any tension, and everybody had fun
No temper, No fear
And everyone was dear

Wouldn’t it be any better if...
Not a single person lived in orphanages,
No one held any grudges
Everyone lived happily
No one lost their family!

I wish there were no discriminations
None of us suffered any complications...
There was no such thing as hatred,
No one’s talent was wasted

But, shall I tell this with a sorrow
The possibility of world being so, is nearly zero...

About this poem

It's a poem about how I feel the world should've been. How couldn't it have been a better place What all things could've changed It's the first poem I wrote :)

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Written on September 27, 2022

Submitted by drishtidrishti29 on September 27, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AABBCC XDDEE AXFF GG
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 569
Words 110
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 6, 5, 4, 2

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