I touched her feet
I touched her feet When I took bath on her shining legs
I touched her feet When I learned to stand up on my own
I touched her feet To get the blessings for my beautiful life
I touched her feet Since her cramped legs hurt her
I touched her feet At the marriage hall, to put her the ring
I touched her feet In the cot to start my journey of life with her
I touched her feet To massage her to reduce the burden of weight in her tummy with my junior
I touched her feet With tiny pinky fingers that stabbed on my face
I touched her feet when she slept due to leg's overtime
I touched her feet when she was sleeping to render my thanks
At last, I touched her feet when she was lying in the seat of Heaven's vehicle
And I also slept on her feet to travel the even my last minutes with her. .!!
About this poem
This poem gives a message that every women is beautiful in her way she makes her own life for her family. It is written in a men's emotion. Read and let us travel in her love...!!!
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Written on September 11, 2022
Submitted by Pavithrarajan1898 on September 11, 2022
Modified on March 05, 2023
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Quick analysis:
| Scheme | ABCDEDDFGHID |
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| Closest metre | Iambic octameter |
| Characters | 797 |
| Words | 173 |
| Stanzas | 1 |
| Stanza Lengths | 12 |
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