Destiny of Sunset and Moon



I remember those nights I listened to you,
It always made my heart burst
But you couldn't see the way I feel into
And it made my feelings thirst.

You are the moon that lights me up when I am in the dark,
The moon is beautiful tonight isn't it?
I always said that and smirk
Closing my eyes, feel your light.

I am the sunset and you are the moon,
We are destined to be close but not to meet
After I go down, you go up, That is our faith
We will never hook upon.

Sunrise is always there, giving us hope,
But instead of hope, it is acceptance.
The fact that my feelings will never reach you
And it breaks me in an instance.

We will never be together,
You are the light and I am the dark.
We are not compatible,
But destined to be close apart.

About this poem

It's all about how to accept our destiny on someone whether it is bad or good.

Font size:
Collection  PDF     
 

Submitted by cabraljohnpaul9 on September 18, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

51 sec read
0

Quick analysis:

Scheme ABAB CXXX XXXX XDAD XCXX
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 743
Words 169
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4

Discuss the poem Destiny of Sunset and Moon with the community...

0 Comments

    Translation

    Find a translation for this poem in other languages:

    Select another language:

    • - Select -
    • 简体中文 (Chinese - Simplified)
    • 繁體中文 (Chinese - Traditional)
    • Español (Spanish)
    • Esperanto (Esperanto)
    • 日本語 (Japanese)
    • Português (Portuguese)
    • Deutsch (German)
    • العربية (Arabic)
    • Français (French)
    • Русский (Russian)
    • ಕನ್ನಡ (Kannada)
    • 한국어 (Korean)
    • עברית (Hebrew)
    • Gaeilge (Irish)
    • Українська (Ukrainian)
    • اردو (Urdu)
    • Magyar (Hungarian)
    • मानक हिन्दी (Hindi)
    • Indonesia (Indonesian)
    • Italiano (Italian)
    • தமிழ் (Tamil)
    • Türkçe (Turkish)
    • తెలుగు (Telugu)
    • ภาษาไทย (Thai)
    • Tiếng Việt (Vietnamese)
    • Čeština (Czech)
    • Polski (Polish)
    • Bahasa Indonesia (Indonesian)
    • Românește (Romanian)
    • Nederlands (Dutch)
    • Ελληνικά (Greek)
    • Latinum (Latin)
    • Svenska (Swedish)
    • Dansk (Danish)
    • Suomi (Finnish)
    • فارسی (Persian)
    • ייִדיש (Yiddish)
    • հայերեն (Armenian)
    • Norsk (Norwegian)
    • English (English)

    Citation

    Use the citation below to add this poem to your bibliography:

    Style:MLAChicagoAPA

    "Destiny of Sunset and Moon" Poetry.com. STANDS4 LLC, 2024. Web. 27 Apr. 2024. <https://www.poetry.com/poem/139252/destiny-of-sunset-and-moon>.

    Become a member!

    Join our community of poets and poetry lovers to share your work and offer feedback and encouragement to writers all over the world!

    April 2024

    Poetry Contest

    Join our monthly contest for an opportunity to win cash prizes and attain global acclaim for your talent.
    3
    days
    8
    hours
    25
    minutes

    Special Program

    Earn Rewards!

    Unlock exciting rewards such as a free mug and free contest pass by commenting on fellow members' poems today!

    Browse Poetry.com

    Quiz

    Are you a poetry master?

    »
    What are the first eight lines of a sonnet called?
    A octave
    B octopus
    C octane
    D octet