Daughters on a Thorn Path
DAUGHTERS ON A THORN PATH
Daughters on the thorn path are born with bloody feet
Ancestors like to say they are made by other bloody daughters
But they are born
From fire and tears
Fire in their heads, fire on their tongues
Fire in the curve of their hips
Fire in their blood, they knew how to wield
I knew a fire descendant once
I saw her wield her flame
She did not cry out even though we hear her skin sizzle
Her smile betrayed knowledge her mocking audience knew not of
Mother said those daughters like to do that
Pretend the flames they made did not burn them
Pretend their feet did not feel all the blood they shed
But I saw her and found kin, I wanted what she had
The thrill of having the power to burn others even when I burn
So, I walked to the entrance to the thorn path
Deeper and deeper I walked
Until the thorns grew thicker and bigger and pointer
I became born of blood and fire and tears
And wielded fire my audience did not understand
But sometimes I wonder
What a road without sharp sticks feels like
Sometimes I look to my sisters on the smooth road
They shake their head at me and I do to them too
Do I not see the thorns on my feet they think?
Are they not able to see the snakes on their thighs I ask?
So, I and my thorn sisters ask each other
Would you rather have sticks in your feet and know it?
Or be beaten by snakes you do not see?
About this poem
This is simply a poem about choosing different paths from what we should as women. Good women should not do certain things; good women should not be feminists, it goes against ancestral roles cut out for us as women. It talks about how some of us trod this path and how society, how many women do not support it. It explains how women, with our difference in ideologies point fingers at each other even though we are all hurting from our choices.
Written on September 25, 2022
Submitted by Olawunmiplatinum on September 25, 2022
Modified on March 05, 2023
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Quick analysis:
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Closest metre | Iambic pentameter |
Characters | 1,363 |
Words | 281 |
Stanzas | 4 |
Stanza Lengths | 8, 9, 7, 7 |
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