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cant go further

Miracle black 2005 (Blantyre)

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Timidity made me fail
I floundered to inherit your love
But you considered my words trivial
All the words I launched landed like a fracas in your ear
Now all I have is fear
Fear to anticipate your love
Because you protestingly withdrew me from your heart.
Now I am exasperated and perplexed

About this poem

Its about rejections that made me mind blown.i once was in love with somebody who had no thought of me ever since .so everytime i tried to open up to her,she refused me.on the contrary i was shy and that was the worst thing.

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Written on September 07, 2022

Submitted by prosblk2 on September 07, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Scheme ABCDEBFG
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 291
Words 55
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 8
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