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Still I'm lying

Prabin Panta 2004 (Lamjung)

I'm missing
I'm breaking
I'm dying

But still,
I'm lying

Because
I want to see you happy
I want to see you smiling
I want to see you laughing

So,
I am lying

But still,
I'm happy to see you smiling
after waking from the long night
of that nightmare

But still,
It makes me sad to see you
with someone else

I wanted to live happily with you

So,
To make you happy
I will try to be happy
I will try to live
And
I won't show how much I love you .

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Written on October 06, 2022

Submitted by Atley0 on October 06, 2022

Modified on April 10, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme aaa Ba xcaa Da Baxx Bex e Dccxxe
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 456
Words 116
Stanzas 8
Stanza Lengths 3, 2, 4, 2, 4, 3, 1, 6
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