Analysis of Still I'm lying



I'm missing
I'm breaking
I'm dying

But still,
I'm lying

Because
I want to see you happy
I want to see you smiling
I want to see you laughing

So,
I am lying

But still,
I'm happy to see you smiling
after waking from the long night
of that nightmare

But still,
It makes me sad to see you
with someone else

I wanted to live happily with you

So,
To make you happy
I will try to be happy
I will try to live
And
I won't show how much I love you .


Scheme aaa Ba xcaa Da Baxx Bex e Dccxxe
Poetic Form Tetractys  (40%)
Metre 110 110 110 11 110 01 1111110 1111110 1111110 1 1110 11 11011110 10101011 111 11 1111111 111 1101110011 1 11110 1111110 11111 0 11111111
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 456
Words 116
Sentences 1
Stanzas 8
Stanza Lengths 3, 2, 4, 2, 4, 3, 1, 6
Lines Amount 25
Letters per line (avg) 13
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 42
Words per stanza (avg) 12

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Written on October 06, 2022

Submitted by Atley0 on October 06, 2022

Modified on April 10, 2023

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