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YOU

Eva

you are someone special,
someone I want to know,
but you are
someone who is bad for me,
someone who hurts me so painfully
that actually it feels good
someone who is that powerful over me
that when you step in my mind
my heart is dropping
breathing speeding
hot waves crueling
I hate to feel that way so much,
so why am I loving you?
why am I thinking of you?
why you?
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Submitted by 3Va on September 29, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Scheme ABCDDEDFGGGHIII
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 377
Words 84
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 15
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