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I see you

Kita B

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I SEE YOU

I SEE YOU AT YOUR BEST
I SEE YOU AT YOUR WORST
I SEE YOU MAKE SACRIFICES FOR EACH ONE OF YOUR little ones.
I SEE YOU WANTING TO GIVE UP BUT YOU KEEP MAKING WAVES.
I SEE YOU FALL TO THE GROUND JUST TO PRAY.
I SEE YOU ASKING GOD FOR STRENGTH TO CARRY YOU ON YOUR WAY.
DON'T EVER THINK YOUR NOT BEENING SEEN.
THE STRENGTH YOU CARRY IS 2Xs an ARMY BASE.
Keep fighting my sister as your battle has already been won.

About this poem

Dedicated to my oldest sister. Don't ever give up!!!

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Written on September 17, 2022

Submitted on September 17, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme X XXXXAAXXX
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 428
Words 99
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 1, 9
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