Mard ki Akkarh

Vijay kumar sharma 1949 (India HP)



Dehleej par KARTE uske kadam rule to the
Uski umeed bhari Ankho ne tha sub kuchh KEH dala
Use Rokne hamare kadam uthe to THAI
Mard ki Akkarh ne tha unhe daba dala

Phone aaya to tha jiska hame intzar to tha
Receiver jhat uthha kaan se laga dala
Unki siskiyo bhari helo ko ham ab tak na bhula paye
Mard ki akkarh ne jubban per tala laga dala

Bichole ne Hame malaya ham sang sang baithevti the
Unki dab dabi ankho ne tha dil ki pighla dala
Barhhe huye haath gar barh kar thham letee
Mard ki akkarh ne wo  haath chhura dala

Roj raat din unhe ham sapno me milte to the
Us bholi see surat ko phoolo se saja dala
Kash use dil khol ke DIkha pate
Mard ki akkar ne ghar sansar jalal dala

About this poem

MY original poem TITLED as above was posted in poetry. Com in 1999 I am surprised it is not found here If this is new site with old name???

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Written on January 24, 1999

Submitted by vijay.senioradvisor.mamu on September 08, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme ABXB ABXB ABCB ABCB
Closest metre Iambic heptameter
Characters 687
Words 148
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4

Vijay kumar sharma

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  • vijay.senioradvisor.mamu
    This poem was posted in poetry.com in 1999 and was credited as best articulation by the organising editor and had many comments by Paki and Indian members
    Can some one comment the fate of that poetry.com on which I have more than one hundred poems/ poetic comments 
    LikeReply1 year ago

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