When a thought collapsed
Deep into the abyss I stare,
A realm of its own I don’t know where.
Empty till the end of time,
Filled with no entropy nor shine.
Despair drowns in it,
Distortion awakens out of it.
An empty relic without a soul ,
Whispers slowly into the hole.
A fatuous comment indeed I told ,
Defying the dark soul.
Stricken with grief and solicitude ;
Unable to comprehend it’s magnitude,
I jump into the ill- lit tube.
- nikhilesh
About this poem
A quick composition of what goes on a mind of a Perpetually confused person
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Submitted by nikhileshrgowda1999 on August 07, 2022
Modified on March 05, 2023
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Scheme | AABCDDEEFEGGH |
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Closest metre | Iambic tetrameter |
Characters | 472 |
Words | 90 |
Stanzas | 1 |
Stanza Lengths | 13 |
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