Under the moon

Annie anson 2008 (Rajasthan)



Under the same moon, under the same sky; create different stories, different lives.

Running with the time, how they fight.
Some survive,some still try,
some lose while others cry.

see yourself as a peony little thing, holding little burden, blaming time.

 Its in your hand and head for time dosen't wait,
still all keep hope and strive,
weeds are flowers too we cry.

walking through the valley of shadow, with some thoughts in our head.

 we see up, while all this happenes;
 under the same moon, under the same sky.

About this poem

Writing this poem I felt that we all are just running in an imaginary race, where all wants to just win. But in reality we are just going with the flow, we will have to come back to the place we started from one day then what's the hurry, thinking with a calm mind can be an option too. In the end we take bad decisions and blame time and God for it, in the end the thing we all will be left with will just be a river of worries only we will then regret the decisions we took in the past, or habits we never really got rid of Or adopted. ... Though another true fact can be that time is continuously running it never stops, so we should not waste it but as I said in the end what we will face is breaking through yet another storm so then why take bad decisions, make the worst possible choice when you can think the way out peacefully. Remember that this second will only come once and then it will be over, then in an ocean with all silence shut, in ever sound which will be cut, you can be sinking  

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Submitted by Ariapark960 on August 06, 2022

Modified on April 29, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme A XBB X XXB X AB
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 527
Words 106
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 1, 3, 1, 3, 1, 2

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