To the loveless you

Joan Anuforo 2004 (Lagos)



We started out good, a little too good
It happened so fast,but I'd thought we'd last
I struggled to breathe within us,
As the toxicity ate between us
You tore me apart from the inside
Bit by bit till I was hollow inside
You drove me insane, I always in pains
Good riddance left me broken, again
It's over now, I break free of the chains of you

Now traces of you still linger
But healing never felt better
These pains, these chains, made me tougher
I wish you the best and even better
I smile now, I'm happy I'm stronger
In the days to come,I know I'll be happier
Thank you, your war made me a fighter

About this poem

This poem is about someone in an estranged relationship , he/she feels emotionally mistreated by the other, it's about the pains of a failed relationship and how good it feels to heal from such.

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Written on August 25, 2022

Submitted by joananuforo123 on August 25, 2022

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Scheme XXAABBXXX CCCCCCC
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 602
Words 123
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 9, 7

Joan Anuforo

I am a Nigerian born and based writer, fluent with the use of English. I am fair in the African complexion and is about 5ft 5inchea in height. Apart from writing, my hobbies are dancing and singing more…

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