Oedema



Water
It rises and falls
Water
It took away your soul
Water
In your lungs and bones
Water
In your heart and stones
Water
In your eyes and mine
Water
In the day and night
Water
Broke from you to me
Water
A tear in memory

About this poem

It's a poem written in memory of my mother, whom I lost to heart failure. Every time I see my reflection in water, I can't help but think of her. This is not a tribute to her. It's an elegy. A death song, if you may.

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Written on August 09, 2022

Submitted by eesharaazia1512 on August 11, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AbAcAdAdAeAfAgAg
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 219
Words 46
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 16

Eesha Raazia

I am a 24 years old doctor with a soft corner for people and words. I have graduated from King Edward Medical University and I plan to pursue a career in the UK. I hope to one day publish all the anecdotes I've gathered in my work field and personal life, although the way our job works, time is always short. more…

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