No redemption
Brighton *B Shaps* Mavenge 2022 (Zvishavane)
Broken
Bleeding
Hurting
Confused
Lost
By these you can define me
Tears flow
Without stopping and yet
No-one can see them
My cries are so loud
They cannot be heard
My plead for help
Is out in the open
Where nobody sees it
My mind eats itself
The heart has already turned...
The way I rejoice with them
They see a happy man
If only they knew
behind that smile they see
Is a loud voice
Screaming for help
Looking for redemption
Where it cannot be found
Many lies I have been told
Life is what you make of it
If that be the case
How has mine become this
Who be the writer of my story
For you I have many questions
If i am the writer
How come I have no control
About this poem
Deep emotional regret
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Written on August 06, 2022
Submitted by bmavenge on August 07, 2022
Modified on March 17, 2023
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Quick analysis:
| Scheme | ABBXXC XXDXXEAF XXDXX CXEAX XFXXCXXX |
|---|---|
| Closest metre | Iambic trimeter |
| Characters | 661 |
| Words | 141 |
| Stanzas | 5 |
| Stanza Lengths | 6, 8, 5, 5, 8 |
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